8.31.2010

*possible newbie?*

{i'm feeling so/so about this idea and wanted to get your feedback...i was inspired by sally from shim & sons...she created this adorable flag banner card and i thought it was the sweetest little card! i wanted to create that same feeling on a one-piece.
i'm not sure why i'm feeling so unsure about this one..maybe it's the colors that i used. what do you think?
i love feedback...}

7 comments:

MandK said...

Perhaps it needs a little something...it looks like a celebration! but for what? maybe a birthday cake with candles? Welcome Home? or another banner criss crossing the first?

b said...

I like it d, maybe you could make the flags bigger to take up more of the white space? b.

Christine @ 12,450miles said...

I love the idea!! Could it be that it feels slightly off balance? Like maybe the "arc" of the garland needs to be more exaggerated? Or maybe like MandK said, add another one... swooping below? (I find onesies tough in that there's a whole lot going on around the neckline... seams, edges, etc)

PS - LOVE the napkins above...

hear.t. and hue said...

M&K read my mind! :) i thought having the same banner on the opposite side, criss-crossing would help pull it off! but ... as i look at it & picture it, i wonder if that would be too "muddy" / "busy". so maybe like on the opposite side [armpit to shoulder flap] do green ric rac with blueish pennants?

such a cute idea for a "party" one piece!

knack said...

i LOVE it, and think it is perfection....i'm all about clean design....and off center is even better! :)
rock it sister!

xo

Lindsay - Pen and Paint said...

So cute! Like the idea of using different colored flags.

Grace said...

love it! so cute!